'14-15 Preseason Hoops Outlook

Connell62

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Couple of things:

- There was no mention of Tadric, and then he starts the next to last paragraph by saying "Aside from Jackson..." That is a pretty big exclusion.. He will be one of the primary guards in the rotation whether he starts or not. It's almost like a paragraph got deleted or left out or something.

- Why the blurb at Juwan Staten while BG was at Dayton? How in any way was that relevant to a preseason preview for Georgia Tech. He should have left that out. If things do not end well for BG at Tech, it will certainly be more related to W/L's than anything like that.
 

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If I wasn't studying abroad in France, I would be there. Go support these guys.

Hope that someone will post a detailed analysis of how the team looks. How do the new guys look? Does Bolden look actually improved? Does MGH look like the leader of the team and a rising star this season? How does Jorgenson look running the offense? So many questions, wish I could be there.
 

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"is going to be" and "is going to have" constructions are all over this piece. If "Everyone knows..." about injuries, why does he take up a paragraph telling us? "players that are coming in" should be "who are coming in." Players are still living people.

Terrible writing. And, the least insight possible. I cringe when a GT blogger posts something like this. It reenforces the image that the nerds at Tech can't communicate in a literate manner.
 
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